http://www.vice.com/read/can-i-get-in-the-van-000288-v20n4
This is easily my favorite piece of journalism that I've read in the past few months. Basically, the writer is assigned to write a piece on the two reunited versions of the famed punk rock/experimental/psychedelic band Black Flag. The writer, a musician, hears that Black Flag is auditioning bassists and decides to hitchhike his way across the country to Texas where the auditions are held. He melts the faces of the guys in the band, and he practices with them for a week. They offer him a spot in the band. He turns them down and goes back to New York, bass in hand.
I think this is such a fascinating piece because the writer put himself completely into the story. He showed a Hunter S. Thompson-esque disregard for his original assignment (write about a reunited band) and decided to dive into the story completely. In doing so, he is able to provide a perspective no other journalist will ever get: one from inside the band. We can see the criteria guitar player Greg Ginn has in mind for players (Do you smoke weed?") and it gives the reader an amazing insight into the musical process of how this band jams, man. Furthermore, it's fascinating from a narrative standpoint. It's a damn good story.
It also raises some interesting questions. Did Erick Lyle violate journalistic ethics? Is there too much of him in the piece? Does his involvement render the piece ineffective. I don't think so, but I'd like to hear other opinions.
Wednesday, May 29, 2013
Wednesday, May 22, 2013
The Church in the Basement
1,828 Words
Kalamazoo Gazette Faith Section
The Church in the
Basement
About a
quarter of a mile down Winchell
Avenue, there is a large brown-brick church with a
wooden cross in the yard facing all who drive by. Inside the door, there is a grandfatherly
greeter named Richard handing out bulletins and hugs. To the right of the
foyer, there is an imposing sanctuary with rows of hard wooden pews and another
cross standing behind a raised pulpit. The sanctuary is completely empty, and
this often confuses first-time visitors, until they are directed downstairs by
Richard.
Travelling
down the two flights of stairs reveals a basement lit by fluorescent lights
where thirty or so gray-haired men and women are milling around and finding
seats as a younger man with an immaculately-trimmed beard plays guitar,
fingerpicking his way through one of today’s hymns one last time before the
service. There are plenty of battered, mint-colored chairs arranged two-deep in
a half-circle, flanked on both sides by large white banners painted in a wide
array of colors with people, rainbows and all manners of LGBTQ pride symbols.
At the center of this explosion of color is a table covered with a pristine
white cloth holding two candles with a tasteful bronze cross in the center. Off
to the side, there is a miniature statue of a rainbow-colored phoenix rising
from the flames.
There’s a
man behind the altar, about fifty, bald, with glasses. He’s clad in a dark-blue
shirt with a blue-striped tie and grey pants, and he would look like a
well-dressed accountant were it not for the fact that he is standing behind an
altar wearing a rainbow-colored stole emblazoned prominently with custom gay
pride symbols.
That man is Ken Arthur, pastor of Phoenix
Community Church.
He is gay, and so are about eighty percent of his parishioners. Most members of
his flock are between fifty and seventy, and they are a delightful cast of
characters.
On the left
side of this semicircle of chairs is Marvel, a retired woman after left behind
her Bible Baptist upbringing because she “hated getting in trouble for
thinking” and came to Phoenix
twenty-five years ago.
Mark is
sitting behind Marvel. Mark is a gay man in his forties and a former Catholic
who left the church in disgust one Sunday after the priest gave a gay-bashing
sermon from the book of Leviticus. The experience soured him on faith, and he
considers himself an agnostic now, but that hasn’t stopped him from coming to Phoenix for twenty years.
He still sings hymns and asks for prayers during the service despite his
agnosticism.
Myrna
walks in five minutes before the service begins. Myrna is an older woman in her
seventies with laugh lines that testify to her readiness to smile. She came
here years ago to learn more about gay people, and, in the process, learned
that she was a lesbian herself when she fell in love with another member of the
congregation.
At six
o’clock every Sunday night, they meet in this basement, a space they rent from
the Kalamazoo Church of Disciples, a faith community brave enough and liberal
enough to accept Phoenix’s community with open arms. No one seems to mind
meeting in the basement; after all, a basement beats a closet every time.
Besides,
basements are nothing new to Phoenix’s
parishioners. In fact, they started out in a basement. On Ash Wednesday in
February of 1988, eighteen people met in Pastor Cyril Stevenson’s basement for Phoenix’s inaugural
service. Cyril had been dismissed from the United Church of Christ for being
gay, and he decided to start Phoenix
with co-Pastor Melanie Morrison in order to provide a safe place for LGBTQ men
and women to worship. For a long time, theirs was the only church that accepted
LGBTQ people.
After that
initial meeting, the church bounced from basement to rented room to basement,
staying on the margins of the faith community until acceptance began to prevail
in the mid-nineties, and Phoenix
was accepted back into the United Church of Christ after a long process of
accreditation. After the leadership of other UCC churches in the area examined Phoenix under a microscope, there was a vote, and Phoenix was welcomed back
into the fold with open arms.
Despite
finding a degree of acceptance, they continued to stay in rented spaces for
financial reasons. Small churches always live on the edge when it comes to
making rent and paying salaries, and Phoenix
is no exception. Even at their height of membership, the community never
numbered more than sixty, so it was always a struggle to make rent. Inevitably,
disputes over money began to arise, and a gulf that was too wide to be bridged
grew between two groups within the church. In 2007, a third of the congregation
left to form another church.
But it’s a
difficult to kill a phoenix, and the church clung to life, continuing to
provide community to those who had been ostracized for the sexual orientation.
One person who sought out that community was current Pastor, Ken Arthur. Ken
left his faith behind when he went to college because he was unable to
reconcile the idea of a loving God with the idea of hellfire and damnation.
After coming out at age thirty, he came to Phoenix in 1996 seeking a support system to
aid him in his self-discovery. Over the course of four or five years, Ken’s
skepticism gradually melted away, and he came to affirm the divinity of Jesus
Christ.
To further
explore his newfound spirituality, Ken decided to enroll in the Chicago
Theological Seminary in 2007. While he was there, he received a Master’s in
Religious Studies rather than a Divinity degree, because he “definitely didn’t
want to be a pastor.”
Within a year, Ken became Phoenix’s pastor. Because of the split,
Phoenix needed
an interim pastor, and Ken was asked to step because of his time at the
Seminary. His congregation liked him so much that they made him the full-time
pastor in 2010. Because Ken was a member for so long, there isn’t much of a
hierarchy between pastor and flock. The congregants are quick to mention this,
often excitedly. “Feel free to talk to Ken. He was one of us for a long time.”
There are no divisions here. He might be the head, but he is still a part of
the body.
Because of
this, Ken doesn’t appear perturbed when the clock reads 6:00 and people are
still chatting and making their rounds. He waits patiently, going over notes
until people find their seats. When things settle down, he motions to Frank, an
elderly gentleman wearing a conservative blue dress shirt, and Frank uses a
candle at the end of a long golden handle to light the candles on the altar,
signifying that it is time to begin.
The service
begins with a call to worship based on Psalm 148. Pastor Ken exhorts his
congregation to “Praise the Great Spirit from the Heavens” and they respond “Praise
the Holy One from the skies above.”
It’s the
Sunday after Arbor Day, so Ken invites Jim up to read the poem “Let the trees
be consulted” by John Wright. Jim, a former paramedic in his forties, reads
beautifully. With passion evident in his voice, he recites “Let lumber be
treasured like gold/let chainsaws be played like saxophones,” setting the tone
for the environmentally-focused service. Everyone raises their voice to sing a
few hymns that celebrate the divine beauty of nature.
After a few
songs, the hymnals are set on the floor and the members of the congregation
share their joys and concerns for the week. This week, the joys outnumber the
concerns. There is celebration of retirement, of children being born, and
flowers budding. Though there are fewer concerns, they are heavy. The piano
player, Linda, had to kick her alcoholic brother out of her house because he
recently fell off the wagon. People are hurting and dying, and the members of Phoenix share their grief
freely with one another. There is no filter, no effort to put up a front and
disguise hurt here. As Myrna later puts it, “The prayers are so much more real
here.”
Once the
sharing ends, the prayers commence. Everyone closes their eyes and joins hands,
giving thanks to God for their joys and entreating God for help with their
sorrows. This prayer can last for a hand-crampingly long time, but no one
minds. Cramped hands are just a side-effect of caring.
Once every
joy and concern has been addressed, the Phoenicians recite a gender-neutral
adaptation of the Disciples Prayer. Their voices are strong, though people read
at different speeds, giving the prayer an off-kilter feel.
Ken calls
up Katy and Mona to sing a song, and they give a spirited rendition of the
Indigo Girls tune “A Hammer and a Nail,” accompanied by Jonathan, the
guitarist. Such rapid switchbacks between religious and secular happen often at
Phoenix, often
rapidly enough to give an unaccustomed visitor whiplash.
As the last
note dies out, Ken walks up to begin his message. Ken doesn’t have the
prototypical preacher’s voice. His is a wispy tenor, not a booming baritone,
and he speaks without amplification because the soundboard has been acting up
lately. His is a voice that is easily drowned out by anyone with a microphone,
or even just a determined, loud man holding a sign on a street corner. He is
not loud enough to compete with the Pat Robertson of the world. Yet when he
preaches the Gospel, he still grabs you. The quiet passion in his voice is
palpable, like a cup running over quietly.
In fact, overflowing
is the subject of Ken’s message. He reads from the Book of John, emphasizing
Jesus’s call for his disciples to “Love one another. As I have
loved you, so you must love one another. By this
everyone will know that you are my disciples, if you love one another.” Let
love overflow. Work to realize the Kingdom
of God here on Earth.
Work for peace and hope and justice. It is stirring. People are moved, in
spirit as well as body: a construction paper poster with a crude tree
glued on it boasts 254 hours of community service, 11 trees planted, and 4
letters written as a part of the church’s Arbor Day campaign for environmental
stewardship. This is a place of dirty fingernails and grass stains.
Ken closes
his remarks, and Frank extinguishes the flame on the altar candles as everyone
sings one more song, a hymn penned by a former member that reminds the members
of Phoenix to
be the light in the world even as the ceremony ends.
Ken gives
his benediction, and everyone passes the peace. There are no awkward handshakes
and mumbled peaceofChristbewithyous here; only hugs and conversation. People
linger a little, chatting for twenty or thirty minutes until it’s time trickle
out, ascending the steps out of the basement back into the world.
The Events of October Reading Response
This book was fascinating to me both as a reader and as someone looking to perfect their craft. I found myself unable to put The Events of October down and I read it in two marathon sessions even though I was a little sick to my stomach. It's pretty easy to alienate the reader when writing about something as awful as a murder-suicide, but Gail managed to tell the story in a manner that demanded my attention. Perhaps this is because the voice of the book is so passionate that it practically forces the reader to pay attention.
One reason I found this book so compelling is it's Middlemarch-like qualities. Gail gives George Eliot/Marian Evans a shout-out early-on, and her influence is pretty easy to see. Kalamazoo College is a lot like the town Middlemarch, in a way: it's a small, cloistered community where everyone knows everyone. And, like Middlemarch, The Events of October is chiefly concerned with the idea of community as a group that changes through constant interaction.
Furthermore, both books are careful to depict the members of their respective communities with great sympathy. Just as Eliot dives into the motives of every character in order to present them in a sympathetic light, Gail eschews judgment in favor of understanding, preferring to explain each subject's motivations. For instance, it would have been very easy to demonize Neenef's friends for their insistence upon a memorial for Neenef. However, the narration makes it clear that this is simply a natural by-product of their grief and trauma. Similarly, it would be easy to ridicule those who preferred to think of the murder-suicide as an isolated incident rather than a femicide indicative of a greater trend of male violence. Instead, Gail tells the reader that compartmentalizing such a traumatic event makes coping easier. Thus, we do not judge these people, even their viewpoint is somewhat pernicious.
This level of sympathy and empathy is quite impressive, and it's indicative of an immense amount of time spent getting to know subjects. We get the sense that the author really knows these people; thus, all of her assertions about motives seem completely valid because they stem from such a deep understanding of the subject. This is a journalistic standard to live up to.
I also thought of Nicholas Lemann's piece in Telling True Stories regarding the "idea track" of a piece of nonfiction. This book's idea track is apparent throughout, and there are lots of excellent "marriage moments." It really serves as a model for lining ideas up with experience.
One reason I found this book so compelling is it's Middlemarch-like qualities. Gail gives George Eliot/Marian Evans a shout-out early-on, and her influence is pretty easy to see. Kalamazoo College is a lot like the town Middlemarch, in a way: it's a small, cloistered community where everyone knows everyone. And, like Middlemarch, The Events of October is chiefly concerned with the idea of community as a group that changes through constant interaction.
Furthermore, both books are careful to depict the members of their respective communities with great sympathy. Just as Eliot dives into the motives of every character in order to present them in a sympathetic light, Gail eschews judgment in favor of understanding, preferring to explain each subject's motivations. For instance, it would have been very easy to demonize Neenef's friends for their insistence upon a memorial for Neenef. However, the narration makes it clear that this is simply a natural by-product of their grief and trauma. Similarly, it would be easy to ridicule those who preferred to think of the murder-suicide as an isolated incident rather than a femicide indicative of a greater trend of male violence. Instead, Gail tells the reader that compartmentalizing such a traumatic event makes coping easier. Thus, we do not judge these people, even their viewpoint is somewhat pernicious.
This level of sympathy and empathy is quite impressive, and it's indicative of an immense amount of time spent getting to know subjects. We get the sense that the author really knows these people; thus, all of her assertions about motives seem completely valid because they stem from such a deep understanding of the subject. This is a journalistic standard to live up to.
I also thought of Nicholas Lemann's piece in Telling True Stories regarding the "idea track" of a piece of nonfiction. This book's idea track is apparent throughout, and there are lots of excellent "marriage moments." It really serves as a model for lining ideas up with experience.
Long-overdue reading response to Telling True Stories That Was Supposed to be Done 7th Week
Better late than never? Right?
As usual, Telling True Stories proved to be an illuminating read. There were a lot of little "a-ha" moments interspersed throughout the text that were unique to their authors. But, I noticed one common theme popping up: the use of cinematic metaphors to describe good nonfiction writing. Whether explicit (like Ephron's "What Journalists Can Learn from Screenwriters") or using a phrase like "he also pulls the camera back, away from the tight shots of the road grader," they seem to permeate the discourse on narrative journalism.
Of course, this makes sense in the context of 20th- and 21st-century literature, as Adam Hochschild shows in his contrast between Middlemarch and The Great Gastby. Literature has become rooted in concrete images rather than reflection. This forces me to ask myself some unpleasant questions: do I focus too much on reflection? Is this what's bogging down my profile?
I tend to mix reflection and scene pretty evenly, which is great for personal essays but maybe not the best idea for writing journalism. Point taken: I need to focus more on scene and allow my journalistic endeavors to become more cinematic while maintaining some of my trademark reflection.
I was amazed at the way Hochschild rendered his scene in the printer's shop so artfully and vividly despite the seemingly-small amount of information available. Also, Louise Kiernan's paragraph about broken glass that required two professors and an expert speaks to the depth of research that is necessary for effective reporting. Clearly, I need to step up my research game as well.
Once again, sorry this is so late.
As usual, Telling True Stories proved to be an illuminating read. There were a lot of little "a-ha" moments interspersed throughout the text that were unique to their authors. But, I noticed one common theme popping up: the use of cinematic metaphors to describe good nonfiction writing. Whether explicit (like Ephron's "What Journalists Can Learn from Screenwriters") or using a phrase like "he also pulls the camera back, away from the tight shots of the road grader," they seem to permeate the discourse on narrative journalism.
Of course, this makes sense in the context of 20th- and 21st-century literature, as Adam Hochschild shows in his contrast between Middlemarch and The Great Gastby. Literature has become rooted in concrete images rather than reflection. This forces me to ask myself some unpleasant questions: do I focus too much on reflection? Is this what's bogging down my profile?
I tend to mix reflection and scene pretty evenly, which is great for personal essays but maybe not the best idea for writing journalism. Point taken: I need to focus more on scene and allow my journalistic endeavors to become more cinematic while maintaining some of my trademark reflection.
I was amazed at the way Hochschild rendered his scene in the printer's shop so artfully and vividly despite the seemingly-small amount of information available. Also, Louise Kiernan's paragraph about broken glass that required two professors and an expert speaks to the depth of research that is necessary for effective reporting. Clearly, I need to step up my research game as well.
Once again, sorry this is so late.
Tuesday, May 14, 2013
Profile edit
1,148 words
The Church in the
Basement
South
beyond Stadium Drive, past rows and rows of suburban homes with immaculate
lawns, Oakland Drive makes a T with Winchell Avenue. About a quarter of a mile down
Winchell, there is a large brown-brick church with a wooden cross in the yard
facing all who drive by. Inside the door, there is a grandfatherly greeter
named Richard handing out bulletins and hugs. To the right of the foyer, there
is an imposing sanctuary with rows of hard wooden pews and another cross
standing behind a raised pulpit. The sanctuary is completely empty, and this
often confuses first-time visitors, until they are directed downstairs by
Richard.
Travelling down the two flights of
stairs reveals a basement lit by fluorescent lights where thirty or so
gray-haired men and women are milling around and finding seats as a younger man
with an immaculately-trimmed beard plays guitar, fingerpicking his way through
one of today’s hymns one last time before the service. There are plenty of
battered, mint-colored chairs arranged two-deep in a half-circle, flanked on
both sides by large white banners painted in a wide array of colors with
people, rainbows and all manners of LGBTQ pride symbols. At the center of this
explosion of color is a table covered with a pristine white cloth holding two
candles with a tasteful bronze cross in the center. Off to the side, there is a
miniature statue of a rainbow-colored phoenix rising from the flames.
There’s a man behind the altar,
about fifty, bald, with glasses. He’s clad in a dark-blue shirt with a
blue-striped tie and grey pants, and he would look like a well-dressed
accountant were it not for the fact that he is standing behind an altar wearing
a rainbow-colored stole emblazoned prominently with custom gay pride symbols.
That man is Ken Arthur, pastor of Phoenix Community Church. He is gay, and so are about eighty percent of his parishioners. Most members of his flock are between fifty and seventy, and they are a delightful cast of characters. There’s Marvel, a retired woman after left behind her Bible Baptist upbringing because she “hated getting in trouble for thinking” and came to Phoenix twenty-five years ago.
That man is Ken Arthur, pastor of Phoenix Community Church. He is gay, and so are about eighty percent of his parishioners. Most members of his flock are between fifty and seventy, and they are a delightful cast of characters. There’s Marvel, a retired woman after left behind her Bible Baptist upbringing because she “hated getting in trouble for thinking” and came to Phoenix twenty-five years ago.
And there’s Mark, a gay man in his
forties and a former Catholic who left the church in disgust one Sunday after
the priest gave a gay-bashing sermon from the book of Leviticus. The experience
soured him on faith, and he considers himself an agnostic now, but he’s been
coming to Phoenix for twenty years, singing hymns and enjoying the community.
Then
there’s Myrna, an older woman in her seventies with laugh lines that testify to
her readiness to smile. She came here years ago to learn more about gay people,
and, in the process, learned that she was a lesbian when she fell in love with
another member.
At six o’clock every Sunday night, they meet
in this basement, a space they rent from the Kalamazoo Church of Disciples, a
faith community brave enough and liberal enough to accept Phoenix’s community
with open arms. No one seems to mind meeting in the basement; after all, a
basement beats a closet every time.
Besides, basements are nothing new
to Phoenix’s parishioners. In fact, they started out in a basement. On Ash
Wednesday of 1988, eighteen people met in Pastor Cyril Stevenson’s basement for
Phoenix’s inaugural service. Cyril had been dismissed from the United Church of
Christ for being gay, and he decided to start Phoenix with co-Pastor Melanie
Morrison in order to provide a safe place for LGBTQ men and women to worship.
For a long time, theirs was the only church that accepted people of different
sexualities.
After that initial meeting, the
church bounced from basement to rented room to basement, staying on the margins
of the faith community until acceptance began to prevail in the mid-nineties,
and Phoenix was accepted back into the United Church of Christ.
Despite finding a degree of
acceptance, they continued to stay in rented spaces for financial reasons.
Small churches always live on the edge when it comes to making rent and paying
salaries, and Phoenix is no exception. Even at their height of membership, the
community never numbered more than sixty, so it was always a struggle to make
rent. Inevitably, disputes over money began to arise, and a gulf that was too
wide to be bridged grew between two groups within the church. In 2007, a third
of the congregation left to from another church.
But it’s a difficult to kill a
phoenix, and the church clung to life, continuing to provide community to those
who had been ostracized for the sexual orientation. One person who sought out
that community was current Pastor, Ken Arthur. Ken left the church when he went
to college because he was unable to reconcile the idea of a loving God with the
idea of hellfire and damnation. After coming out at age thirty, he came to
Phoenix in 1996 seeking a support system to aid him in his self-discovery. Over
the course of four or five years, Ken’s skepticism gradually melted away, and
he came to affirm the divinity of Jesus Christ.
To further explore his newfound
spirituality, Ken decided to enroll in the Chicago Theological Seminary in 2007.
While he was there, he received a Master’s in Religious Studies rather than a
Divinity degree, because he “definitely didn’t want to be a pastor.”
Within a year, Ken became Phoenix’s
pastor. Because of the split, Phoenix
needed an interim pastor, and Ken was asked to step because of his time at the
Seminary. His congregation liked him so much that they made him the full-time
pastor in 2010.
Ken promotes a brand of theology
that rejects easy answers and “simple-minded, warm-and-fuzzy peace.” He
welcomes questions and uncertainties. When asked about the specifics of the
afterlife, he shrugs and says, “Who knows?” “When I talk about the Kingdom, I’m
talking about realizing it here: working for peace and hope and justice here on
Earth.” And they do indeed do work. A construction paper poster boasts 254
hours of community service, 11 trees planted, and 4 letters written as a part
of the church’s Arbor Day campaign for environmental stewardship.
And Ken doesn’t do talk about the
Kingdom in the prototypical preacher’s voice. His is a wispy tenor, not a
booming baritone, and he speaks without amplification. His is a voice that is
easily drowned out by anyone with a microphone, or even just a determined, loud
man holding a sign on a street corner. He is not loud enough to compete with
the Pat Robertson of the world. Yet when he preaches the Gospel, he still grabs
you. The passion in his voice is palpable, like a cup running over quietly, as
he preaches, love, justice, and reconciliation in the basement of a church.
Monday, May 6, 2013
I Think I Might Have Really Shit the Bed on This One: Week Six Process Writing
This assignment was rough. I haven't written anything that could be considered "journalism" since my days as the editor of my middle school newspaper, and it's safe to say that I'm a little rusty. Lots of questions question kept popping up throughout the process of writing, such as:
1. "How do I do journalism?"
I've never done a profile before. It shows. Obviously, I'm going to totally blow the first few times. It's part of the learning process. That knowledge doesn't make it any less distressing to end up with a profile I'm not entirely satisfied with--especially since it concerns subjects that matter a great deal to me.
2. "What the hell was I thinking when I interviewed my subject?"
As I was writing, I found myself wishing for information that I didn't have. I spent a solid block of time interviewing my subject, but I still found myself wishing I had asked more questions or pressed more in certain areas. Again, I'm guessing that knowing what questions to ask is another skill learned through trial-and-error. I have to learn how to anticipate the information I'll need while interviewing. If I'd had time to do a follow-up interview, I think this piece would have been a lot better. Because I had a false start on another subject, I was kind of pressed for time and I did the best I could.
3. "How do I do words good?"
This came after asking the above questions too many times.
4. "asdfjaskdjfasdfjkasdjfklasjdfklmcsdfjklsdjfkl?"
This question came up after trying to do words good for several hours.
5. (uncontrollable sobbing)
In terms of the actual content, I think there are two main flaws. The most critical is that the focus of the piece seems hazy. I couldn't decide whether to focus on the church or the pastor, and I kind of did both. I'm not sure if it works at all because of this. Also, I'm afraid the piece lacks concrete detail and that it reads like a list of things that happened rather than an actual story.
Of course, I'm very self-critical. Only time will tell if it was a caffeine-fueled misadventure or a decent start. At any rate, I'm glad that I'm going to have a shot at revising it and I'm looking forward to hearing everyone's feedback in workshop on Wednesday.
1. "How do I do journalism?"
I've never done a profile before. It shows. Obviously, I'm going to totally blow the first few times. It's part of the learning process. That knowledge doesn't make it any less distressing to end up with a profile I'm not entirely satisfied with--especially since it concerns subjects that matter a great deal to me.
2. "What the hell was I thinking when I interviewed my subject?"
As I was writing, I found myself wishing for information that I didn't have. I spent a solid block of time interviewing my subject, but I still found myself wishing I had asked more questions or pressed more in certain areas. Again, I'm guessing that knowing what questions to ask is another skill learned through trial-and-error. I have to learn how to anticipate the information I'll need while interviewing. If I'd had time to do a follow-up interview, I think this piece would have been a lot better. Because I had a false start on another subject, I was kind of pressed for time and I did the best I could.
3. "How do I do words good?"
This came after asking the above questions too many times.
4. "asdfjaskdjfasdfjkasdjfklasjdfklmcsdfjklsdjfkl?"
This question came up after trying to do words good for several hours.
5. (uncontrollable sobbing)
In terms of the actual content, I think there are two main flaws. The most critical is that the focus of the piece seems hazy. I couldn't decide whether to focus on the church or the pastor, and I kind of did both. I'm not sure if it works at all because of this. Also, I'm afraid the piece lacks concrete detail and that it reads like a list of things that happened rather than an actual story.
Of course, I'm very self-critical. Only time will tell if it was a caffeine-fueled misadventure or a decent start. At any rate, I'm glad that I'm going to have a shot at revising it and I'm looking forward to hearing everyone's feedback in workshop on Wednesday.
The Pastor in the Basement
1,095 Words
Target publication: Some religious magazine
Drive South down Oakland Drive past rows and rows of suburban homes with immaculate lawns, and then take a right down Winchell Avenue. Keep going for about a quarter of a mile until you see a large brown-brick church with a wooden cross in the yard facing all who drive by. Open the door and accept a bulletin and a hug from the grandfatherly greeter. Look to the right at the empty, imposing sanctuary, with another cross standing behind a raised pulpit. Walk towards the sanctuary, only to be directed to the stairs on the left by the smiling greeter. Step into the basement lit by fluorescent lights, take a drink from the white water fountain and see the thirty or so gray-haired men and women milling around and finding seats as a younger man with an immaculately-trimmed beard fingerpicks his way through one of today’s hymns one last time before the service. Take a seat in one of the battered, mint-colored chairs arranged two-deep in a half-circle, and look at the man standing behind the communion table.
Target publication: Some religious magazine
Drive South down Oakland Drive past rows and rows of suburban homes with immaculate lawns, and then take a right down Winchell Avenue. Keep going for about a quarter of a mile until you see a large brown-brick church with a wooden cross in the yard facing all who drive by. Open the door and accept a bulletin and a hug from the grandfatherly greeter. Look to the right at the empty, imposing sanctuary, with another cross standing behind a raised pulpit. Walk towards the sanctuary, only to be directed to the stairs on the left by the smiling greeter. Step into the basement lit by fluorescent lights, take a drink from the white water fountain and see the thirty or so gray-haired men and women milling around and finding seats as a younger man with an immaculately-trimmed beard fingerpicks his way through one of today’s hymns one last time before the service. Take a seat in one of the battered, mint-colored chairs arranged two-deep in a half-circle, and look at the man standing behind the communion table.
He’s about
fifty, bald, with glasses, clad in a dark-blue shirt with a blue-striped tie
and grey pants, and he would look like a well-dressed accountant were it not
for the fact that he is standing behind an altar wearing a rainbow-colored
stole emblazoned prominently with various gay-pride symbols.
That man is
Ken Arthur, pastor of Phoenix
Community Church,
a small United Church of Christ congregation that rents out the basement of the
larger Disciples of Christ church upstairs. He is gay, and so are about eighty
percent of his parishioners. Most members of his flock are in their fifties or
sixties, and they wear their identities proudly: their church’s symbol is a
rainbow-colored phoenix rising up from the flames against the backdrop of the
LGBTQ symbol. The church switches between the traditional and the
nontraditional at breakneck speed. On any given Sunday, an Indigo Girls song
might follow a traditional hymn or a reading of one of Whitman’s poems might
follow the recitation of The Disciples’ Prayer. The one constant is Pastor Ken,
the mastermind, the glue that holds the whole post-postmodern religious collage
together.
Ken never
planned on becoming a pastor, even though he grew up attending church in his
hometown of Anderson, Indiana. The church was quite rigid and
conservative, though Ken remembers thinking it was liberal “because they let us
go to the movies and play cards.” He distills the general mindset of the church
thusly: “God is nice if you believe, and if you don’t, you go to hell.” This
image of God as an angry father troubled Ken, and, unable to reconcile the idea
of a loving God with the existence of hell, he dropped out of church and left
his faith behind when he came to Kalamazoo College in 1984.
After getting
his bachelor’s degree in math from Kalamazoo
and a master’s in Computer Science, Ken began working as a freelance computer
programmer. During his twenties, Ken
says he was an agnostic, though he frequently picked up spiritual texts such as
The Dao of Pooh, a book that is still
jammed in his office bookshelf with scores of other texts about religion and
philosophy.
But that
all changed in 1996 when Ken turned thirty. As Ken puts it, “I was thirty when
I started dealing with being gay.” Ironically, Ken wound up coming back to
church as part of the coming-out process. He heard that Phoenix Community was a
church with a gay pastor, and he visited hoping to “meet more gay people in a
safe environment.” Attending Phoenix,
along doing affirmation exercises that made him “feel like Stuart Smalley,”
helped Ken come to terms with his identity as a gay man. Ken kept coming on
Sundays, and within two years became a full-fledged member of the church.
But despite
his regular Church attendance, Ken remained a skeptic for several more years.
Eventually, though, he wavered from his agnosticism and fell back into faith. Ken
says that rediscovering faith was a slow, gradual process. His one “A-ha!”
moment came when the pastor at Phoenix
led the congregation in a decidedly non-Christian spiritual practice: shamanic
journeying. Essentially, shamanic journeying is a distillation of shamanic
traditions from man varied cultures. By listening to a repetitive tribal
drumbeat, would-be journeyers are able to enter a trance-like altered state
that allows them to tap into the collective unconscious. Ken relates shamanic
journeying to Jungian psychology, saying that it is a way of “dreaming symbolic
meanings from a divine power.” The experience opened him up to the more
intuitive, visceral aspects of faith. Eventually, Ken began to believe in the
divinity of Jesus Christ.
Shortly
after rediscovering his spirituality, Ken decided to pull up stakes and attend
the Chicago Theological Seminary. While studying in the windy city, Ken decided
that he “definitely didn’t want to be a minister” and opted to get a M.A. in
Religious studies rather than the ministerial Master’s of Divinity.
Shortly
thereafter, Ken would, in fact, become a minister. When he returned, he found Phoenix in turmoil.
Money, always a problem for small churches like Phoenix, had caused a great deal of discord
among the congregation, and “enough people hurt enough other people” that
one-third of the church left along with the pastor. Because of his background
in the seminary, Ken was asked to fill in as an interim minister. However, as
the interim period dragged on, he seemed more and more like the best candidate,
and became Phoenix Community’s official pastor in 2010.
As pastor, Ken promotes a brand of theology
that rejects easy answers and “simple-minded, warm-and-fuzzy peace.” He welcomes
questions and uncertainties. When asked about the specifics of the afterlife,
he shrugs and says, “Who knows?” “When I talk about the Kingdom, I’m talking
about realizing it here: working for peace and hope and justice here on Earth.”
And Ken doesn’t
do talk about the Kingdom in the prototypical preacher’s voice. His is a wispy
tenor, not a booming baritone, and he speaks without amplification. His is a
voice that is easily drowned out by anyone with a microphone, or even just a
determined, loud man holding a sign on a street corner. He is not loud enough
to compete with the Pat Robertson of the world. Yet when he preaches the Gospel,
he still grabs you. The passion in his voice is palpable, like a cup running over
quietly, as he preaches, love, justice, and reconciliation in the basement of a
church.
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
Reading Response for Firth Week (for real, this time)
I apologize for the lateness of this response. I was like "No class today? I'll immediately forget about all assignments!"
Telling True Stories turned out to be a fountain of valuable advice. In fact, there was so much information that I felt somewhat like a cracker on the business end of a sandblaster. Every author has so many little "tricks" and piercingly insightful points that it's difficult to keep track of them all. Often, the various authors are in conflict with one another, ie:
"Use a tape recorder!"
"Don't use a tape recorder!"
"Become broskis with the subject!"
"Remain as aloof and mysterious as you possibly can!"
This problem is compounded by the fact that all the authors make their points in a compelling way. Over the course of the reading, I found myself nodding with one author, then swinging to another point of view a few pages later. Who do I believe?
Ordinarily, this would be maddening. However, instead of reacting by screaming "NOOOOOOOOO!" at my book until I cry (like I normally do), I was instead overcome with a strange sense of peace. If I've learned anything about journalism from this book, it's that there are a multitude of ways to report and interview correctly. Two different reporters with different styles can interview the same person and write totally different pieces that are equally successful. No particular style is "right" or "wrong;" it's largely up to the individual.
Of course this isn't to suggest that you can just do whatever and be fine, because you're just "doing you," as the kids say. Even though each person's method of approaching their craft is different, they still have to work to perfect that craft, and be open to other methods of doing things.
Questions of discussion: Am I right in the assertion I made above? If so, what is your style as an interviewer/reporter?
Telling True Stories turned out to be a fountain of valuable advice. In fact, there was so much information that I felt somewhat like a cracker on the business end of a sandblaster. Every author has so many little "tricks" and piercingly insightful points that it's difficult to keep track of them all. Often, the various authors are in conflict with one another, ie:
"Use a tape recorder!"
"Don't use a tape recorder!"
"Become broskis with the subject!"
"Remain as aloof and mysterious as you possibly can!"
This problem is compounded by the fact that all the authors make their points in a compelling way. Over the course of the reading, I found myself nodding with one author, then swinging to another point of view a few pages later. Who do I believe?
Ordinarily, this would be maddening. However, instead of reacting by screaming "NOOOOOOOOO!" at my book until I cry (like I normally do), I was instead overcome with a strange sense of peace. If I've learned anything about journalism from this book, it's that there are a multitude of ways to report and interview correctly. Two different reporters with different styles can interview the same person and write totally different pieces that are equally successful. No particular style is "right" or "wrong;" it's largely up to the individual.
Of course this isn't to suggest that you can just do whatever and be fine, because you're just "doing you," as the kids say. Even though each person's method of approaching their craft is different, they still have to work to perfect that craft, and be open to other methods of doing things.
Questions of discussion: Am I right in the assertion I made above? If so, what is your style as an interviewer/reporter?
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